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The Neighbor
Author: Lisa Aligher
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(Added on Mar 25, 2012)
(This month 21041 readers) (Total 43565 readers) |
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Two needy neighbors discover each other. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Jun 30, 2012 |
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I really liked this story.
Lisa is a great charterer (is she based on you?) and so deliciously sadistic.
I just wish you had got into the characters feelings a bit more and what makes them tick.
As said before, the story seemed a bit rushed and could have been expanded, it would have been so much more.
The action was well thought out and nicely described.
Please consider more characterization and having someone edit your story (it works, I know from experience).
otherwise a very enjoyable story. Keep it up Lisa and thanks.
P.S. I have only given an eight because of the reasons already stated, otherwise who knows ???? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hellman
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Apr 2, 2012 |
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i would have love to read this but was unable because of the righting it had (8/10)
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switchy76
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Mar 28, 2012 |
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good story, but to rushed for me. this story could of been dragged out loads. to short and fast for me, but a great story never less. (8/10)
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