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Broken
Author: SometimesSub
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(Added on Mar 10, 2012)
(This month 16327 readers) (Total 29358 readers) |
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A man is delivered to his Mistress for long term training and reconditioning. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Apr 8, 2012 |
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Good story. The premise is one I've seen many times, with the big slave training academy that the man is taken to and all. But this is a well executed version of it, and I look forward to reading more along the same lines! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
leashseeker
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Mar 16, 2012 |
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Excellent story great premise hope to read more. (9/10)
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johnlw77
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Mar 16, 2012 |
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A very good start. Keep it slow, detailed and intense. He has it coming to him! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jrnd711
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Mar 13, 2012 |
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Very enjoyable so far. Hopefully you will write more and longer chapters continuing the oral humiliation and breaking process. (9/10)
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