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The Eternity Ring
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Mar 4, 2012)
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When Rhonda is force to take on Jessica as her assistant things do not get off to a good start. Will the discovery of a ring change all that? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rocketXpert
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Mar 23, 2012 |
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Rather unusual story, both for this site and in general. I also find it more challenging to rate than most of your work, which is almost always a ten because it is so good for internet erotica. Labeling it as such does not really seem to even do it justice. However, viewing this particular story as regular fiction compels me to judge it a tad more critically than normal.
Maybe it's just me, but I kind of thought the mind reading aspect would be utilized a bit more than it was. It did teach Rhonda to have more empathy and look past her preconceived notions of Jessica, which was certainly important. It's just that when Rhonda became aware of Jessica's domestic abuse situation, I was a little surprised that she didn't take a more proactive stance. On the other hand, I suppose giving Jessica the confidence to take charge of her own life was better in the long run than if Rhonda had jumped in to somehow save the day herself. Still, it was somewhat disappointing that the jerk boyfriend didn't get much of a comeuppance. Those nit-picks aside, I did enjoy the story a great deal and it even prompted me to read up a little on bog bodies afterward.
You've prefaced a couple of your other stories by noting their relative lack of elements that one would ordinarily expect on a site with "BDSM" in the title. I might as well say right now that because I definitely do consider myself a fan, I'm very happy to have the opportunity to read whatever you write, Lisa, whether or not it has anything to do with bdsm or sex- particularly if they're interesting stories with relatable characters, like this one. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2012)
- RX, thank you, as ever, for your thoughtful review.
I understand, and, in many ways, agree with your criticisms. I too wanted Jeremy to come to a sticky end - and the laird, for that matter - but I couldn't make it work. I also fudged the level of mind reading that the ring gave - it seemed to vary with the needs of the plot ;-). Oh well, there's always room for improvement.
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Stephen Miletus
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Mar 13, 2012 |
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(Removing review placed on wrong story -- oops! My comments on this story to come.) (9/10)
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chuck
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Mar 9, 2012 |
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My first time visiting this site in a while and I'm greeted with this gem by Lisa. When here, I usually don't read F/f let alone an non BDSM story. I'm glad I did! (10/10)
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Alix
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Mar 8, 2012 |
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Good one Lisa. (10/10)
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BOOTLICKERDAVE
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Mar 6, 2012 |
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Wonderful story, had me in tears at the end, I love the way Lisa writes, it is about love whether gay or straight, domme or sub. BDSM is always best when there is love and respect. Thanks again Lisa (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Mar 5, 2012 |
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A great story is just that...great. The degree of sexual content doesn't make a story erotic & that is proven here, as this story has little sex but is highly erotic. Once again, we are given perfection by Lisa Jones! (10/10)
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Thomior
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Mar 5, 2012 |
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Loved this story. As the forward says has nothing to do with BDSM. Wonderful engaging story made me want more. (10/10)
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