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Consequences
Author: ynhumiliator
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(Added on Jan 28, 2012)
(This month 26079 readers) (Total 39241 readers) |
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David makes an error in judgement and his shy wife has to endure the shameful "Consequences". The older couple who own the company he works for ensure that they take exactly what they want in recompense for their employees' mistake. I was asked to write a short story around this scenario by David himself. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 1, 2012 |
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Very good. Started just a trifle slow, but built to a very satisfying climax. Left open for a sequel, but complete in itself. (8/10)
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himannv
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Jan 29, 2012 |
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Very good story on the whole. It was very well written and quite enjoyable on a humiliation front. I felt the plot is a bit of a typical one but other than that, it was an excellent story. Good job. (9/10)
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Kingofsting
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Jan 28, 2012 |
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Well done. Would love to see more of this story (10/10)
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