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The Night Before
Author: LemonTart
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(Added on Jan 19, 2012)
(This month 33833 readers) (Total 41458 readers) |
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After a night out without permission, a girl begs her owner to fuck her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2012 |
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Two times nothing in this case equals eight.
Story doesn't amount to much and there's not a hint of a plot, but LemonTart succeeds in creating an atmosphere, in painting a clear picture through dialogue and action/reaction.
"The Night Before" is a bit like shooting into a cloud at 250 miles per hour and then, once inside, seeing things in technicolored slow-motion.
Like I said, not much of a story, but the little that's there is very well done -and written.
JJ (8/10)
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