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The Haven Author: Vdias
(Added on Jan 8, 2012) (This month 48394 readers) (Total 86011 readers)
A personal fitness trainer and a snobby young executive find a hidden side to the tropical island resort called the Haven.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: bleckerde (Edit) Rating: Jan 21, 2012
the story starts out very promising. i'm looking forward to future updates. (9/10)

Reviewer: purplesi (Edit) Rating: Jan 17, 2012
looking forward to future chapters, great story (9/10)

Reviewer: SamCurious (Edit) Rating: Jan 14, 2012
very promising. am looking forward to your updates. (9/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 11, 2012
Story is saved by the writing style and the excellent dialogue and descriptions which make the characters stand out.
Otherwise, we would be stuck yet again with flat, two-dimensional figures of which half are pre-destined subs/masochists.
But Vdias keeps things interesting thanks to the fluidity of the tale and said dialogue.
Nice.
JJ (8/10)
Replied by: MrDang (Edit) (Jan 11, 2012)
Thanks for your feedback! I'm aware that I'm not breaking new ground here but re-treading worn steps. However I wanted to improve on the poor writing style that we so often see in these stories. As always, all feedback is appreciated.
Edit: I changed my name while publishing this story so sorry for any confusion.

Reviewer: switchy76 (Edit) Rating: Jan 11, 2012
brilliant. need more soon (9/10)

Reviewer: fitzgilbert (Edit) Rating: Jan 9, 2012
j'attend deja la suite (9/10)

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