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Clinic of Happiness Author: Barbara1795
(Added on Nov 9, 2011) (This month 11195 readers) (Total 19745 readers)
modified women's story

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Weighed Average (?): (3/10)
Average Rating: (2/10)
Highest Rating: (4/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Dec 24, 2011
I must admit it's been a while since I had so much fun reading a story. I mean, the mistranslationed form in which "Clinic Of Happiness" is presented here is simply hilarious.
That being said, it is of course this rather unfortunate mistranslation which brings the story down, since it doesn't make much sense.
Like others said before me, "Clinic Of Happiness" could become quite the good tale should it be translated properly.
As such, I would urge Barbara1795 to try and set things right, because I have a feeling -judging by what's underneath the story- that she's not a "bad" author. Just an unfortunate one.
JJ (4/10)

Reviewer: gilgamekk (Edit) Rating: Dec 1, 2011
The story was there, but it was quite a challenge to figure out what was happening beneath the complete failure of the English language. That being said, it felt limited: rather than simply hearing what happens to each of the letter categorizations, how about more details of what it is like? (1/10)

Reviewer: kalle2222 (Edit) Rating: Nov 14, 2011
I am sorry, I could not understand this story at all, it should have been translated by someone who speaks English, not a translator program. At least it was short so I could finish it, if it is finished, I am not sure. (1/10)

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