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julie the Cum Disposal Unit
Author: Julie Jones
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(Added on Nov 9, 2011)
(This month 37581 readers) (Total 63084 readers) |
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Julie has the nickname Cum Disposal Unit and it's well deserved. She seeks out ever more humiliation and sexual abuse as she follows a path from common fucktrash to accomplished painslut. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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Unusual, interesting and well-written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 24, 2011 |
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What I liked most about "Julie The Cum Disposal Unit" was its matter-of-factness and the humor Julie Jones managed to sluice-in.
Both are part of the well done inner musings and thoughts of the story's heroine, which make her the more three-dimensional and thus likeable.
Furthermore, everything is well written, with also the right balance in both timing and pace.
All of the above have me hoping to read more from Julie Jones' hand -especially from the darker parts of her mind- be it as added chapters to "Julie The Cum Disposal Unit" or freshly concocted stories...
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Nov 15, 2011 |
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An intriguing tale...
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I have the unique privilege of being intimately acquainted with a pain slut and I found Ms. Julie Jones' "Cum Disposal Unit" story rather well done. It's always refreshing to get a decent glimpse into that psychology that makes a female masochist tick, especially one that likes it sexual and more than a tad humiliating. I think Ms. Jones would definitely qualify as a nympho humiliation pain slut.
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The story in itself is more of a vignette than an actual plot laden tale. It's short, sweet, and rather vivid. The plot centers around a brief introduction into the protagonist, "Julie" who arranges a meeting with a potential paramour. The sexual tension doesn't start until she begins to describe her preparations for the meet, but let me be the first to say that the tension builds rapidly and successfully. Had this story been longer, or had a second part, it would easily have pushed readers into their own climax.
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Grammatically the story is decent. There were only a few minor word switch errors. Sentences were built with a good combination of compound and simple sentences, and I didn't see any major problems. The only issue I had was halfway through the story the author switched tense from past to present. This was very awkward and while I'm not saying an author CAN'T do this, it has to be done with style and grace.
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One of the things that disappointed me in this tale was that the narrator made a big point of explaining that she was a pain slut, and yet practically everything done to her in the story was humiliating and only marginally painful. Granted, I've never fucked a shoe, but even this descriptive sex act seemed only mildly uncomfortable. Personally, I'd never ask for my SHOE to be fucked. My fist, my big toe, my cock... maybe. My shoe? I don't think so.
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The story ends with piss place, a definitive turn off for me, but certainly consistent with the rest of the story. Again, it highlights Julie's interest in humiliation, not in pain. Interesting how this went.
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What I also enjoyed, at least from my perspective, how different Julie handles her interests compared to my site's co-author, Breanne, a self proclaimed nympho humiliation pain slut. Breanne seems to never have trouble finding guys willing to spank, clamp, whip, smack, and abuse her. But then, she's a south Texas girl. I can't help thinking Ms. Julie would make an admirable nympho humiliation pain slut.
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In summary, this story is a well written and interesting quickie certain to stiffen or moisten the appropriate parts, but leave one feeling unsatisfied and wanting. Perhaps that was Julie's intention. As for me, I think I'll sign on to Fetlife now and see if I can find Ms. Julie Jones!
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
cuntkicker
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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Nice to find a cunt who knows what she's worth and what she's good for, and can write something readable (9/10)
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