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The Seventh Aria
Author: Brewt
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(Added on Oct 4, 2011)
(This month 18748 readers) (Total 39948 readers) |
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An homage to Viddler, a transgressive school fantasy that goes too far, definitely not for the kids; probably not the adults, either. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 13, 2012 |
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For my first time ever on this board, I have to admit that I didn't understand a story at all. I couldn't follow the plot; I couldn't follow the cuts back and forth in time (at least, I assume it was cutting back and forth in time, but I can't swear to it); I couldn't keep track of who was narrating; and I couldn't keep track of which characters were which. I wasted half an hour of my life trying to struggle through this mess. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Riptide
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Oct 8, 2011 |
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Loved it, especially the Armada section. Please write more ;) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
d1ll1gaf
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Oct 7, 2011 |
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The formatting in this story makes it impossible to follow (on multiple browsers I see a black diamond with a question mark in it throughout the story). The paragraphs I was able to follow showed some promise but since I couldn't follow the story at all I have to give it a 1 (although if the formatting where fixed I would re-read it and improve it's score) (1/10)
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- Replied by:
brewt
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2011)
- That's odd - it was fine (online) the day before yesterday. The diamondy-questionmarks are the double quote marks and the ellipses. I'll check in with the administrators here, as to why the encoding would change...thanks for noticing.
- Replied by:
brewt
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2011)
- Additional note: I just saved a copy of it off-line, and it all looks fine. Try that - if you want me to send you a copy, I'll work something out. Thanks again for noticing.
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| Reviewer:
iceblock
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Oct 5, 2011 |
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Gee, that was hard to follow. But really, really good, kept me in right to the end. Which is a bit unusual for me with these longer stories. Thanks for posting. (8/10)
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