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The Lamia
Author: Miss Irene Clearmont
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(Added on Oct 3, 2011)
(This month 15944 readers) (Total 22968 readers) |
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Upon the bleak Scottish moors in winter a single wanderer seeks solace from the storm. What he stumbles upon looks to be simple good hearted assistance but there is more to this refuge than meets the eye. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Oct 5, 2011 |
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Great story! I love the premise, it's always wonderful when somebody finds a new and novel way to tell a D/s story. And I very much enjoyed that Elspeth wasn't some stereotypical ultra-gorgeous young thing - we get a description of an attractive, sexy and yet realistic woman, which grounds the whole thing and makes it more realistic.
I also like the way the fantastical element of the story is introduced quite slowly and builds quite slowly. We're not beaten over the head with Elspeth have magical powers like telepathy or throwing fireboats around or anything. I did think it was a little odd that she relied on viagra to assist in her seductions... I feel like it would gel with the story a little better if she had the ability to induce this feeling in men naturally, through touch, or scent, or just a power of will. For a creature who thrives on sex it would only be logical that she would have the ability to induce lust in others without having to drug them. Still, it's a minor and rather subjective point to be sure.
There were also a couple of minor spelling / grammar errors along the way that would be worth fixing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Miss Irene Clearmont
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2011)
- She relies on Viagra for a couple of reasons...
1. It stops the supernatural twist being given away.
2. I liked the whole soup thing!
Otherwise I'm glad you liked reading this little story. Similar style Femdom is 'The Slaves Of Xi Ling.'
Irene
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nickd1104
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Oct 4, 2011 |
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I found this story to be very well written both from the point of view of content and style of writing.
I look forward to reading more of your work. It's nice to have an F/m story that actually takes place outside a dungeon! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Miss Irene Clearmont
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2011)
- It is always satisfying to get reviewed. Even more so when it is totally positive! Reviews are the bread and butter of the writing impulse,
Irene
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