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Jaded Janice
Author: Blushing slut
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(Added on Aug 14, 2011)
(This month 26401 readers) (Total 40869 readers) |
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A goth girl catches a panty thief red handed. She imprisons him and makes him pay for all the jerk males she's had to bear |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
wistan
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Sep 10, 2011 |
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Good story. I love the character of Janice - so much internet fiction has women who are perfect sex goddesses, to open by saying that she is a little overweight and that her boyfriend just dumped her... it gives her a human quality that hooks you into the story and makes you interested in her. Overall, great work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Blushing slut
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2011)
- Wistan...thanks very much for your review and four star rating to my story. Feedback like yours adds a lot to my future writings.
- Replied by:
wistan
(Edit) (Sep 19, 2011)
- Glad to help! And you deserve it for all that hard work! :-)
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