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A Wiry Dream
Author: Paul Schulz
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(Added on Jul 24, 2011)
(This month 11642 readers) (Total 23504 readers) |
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A fantasy of bondage and pain filled orgasms written for a fictitious lover |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
graycat
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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Very creative and well written! It could benefit from paragraph breaks, but the story itself was excellent. I look forward to reading more from this author. (7/10)
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devot_und_geil
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Jul 31, 2011 |
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Great story, I loved reading it! The idea with the brushes is great, must try it ;-). (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jul 27, 2011 |
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has promise. it is hard to read such large chunks of narrative and in all honesty should be broken down into smaller paragraphs. please keep going. (5/10)
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