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Mailroom Girls
Author: Cambridge Caine
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(Added on Jul 24, 2011)
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Junior executive Kirsten is recruited into a "pilot program" at the corporation where she works. She is systematically humiliated and made to deliver mail in the nude. |
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| Reviewer:
GeekyPhil
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Jan 12, 2015 |
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A lovely story that uses the power of corporate culture to deliver a series of humiliations to female employees. Pacing and introduction to the concepts is excellent. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridgecaine
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2015)
- Thanks for the kind words. Much obliged
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Aug 4, 2012 |
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I agree with previous reviews, it would be nice to read how and why the girls allowed themselves to be in this situation. Other than that it`s a great story, hopefully the humiliations will get worse leading to a few punishments and the girls becoming more subservient. please keep it up. (9/10)
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Falcon
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Aug 1, 2011 |
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Delightful erotic work. I would have liked the process by which she was brought to accept this to have been detailed more. That could have added another whole layer of erotic humiliation. Stories like this in business settings are rare, and this is a good one. I hope there will be more to this story. (9/10)
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rose362436
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Jul 31, 2011 |
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Very nice presentation. The story theme itself is not so new but the way it is presented it is awesome. Please continue to write it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridgecaine
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2011)
- Thanks! I'm very flattered that you chose this story as your first review.
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Curtis
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Jul 28, 2011 |
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Very good story! Will there be more of it?
My only complaint is that you have Christina as girl #4, and she says, "#4 heard it…" Are the girls supposed to refer to themselves in the third person? I always hated that affectation, but I got the impression that maybe it was a typo, which I'd find more acceptable. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridgecaine
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2011)
- Oops, it's a typo. I agree with the sentiment. There's no reason to humiliate the English language alongside the girls. I'll send your 'no-prize' via email.
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Curtis
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2011)
- A No-Prize! You must be a Marvel comics fan (and from my generation). I humbly accept. 'Nuff said.
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Curtis
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2015)
- Part 4 was a good continuation of the series, though shorter than I would've liked. I especially like the way the memos periodically backfire and need to be revised/rescinded. Someone far up in the corporate hierarchy seems to be pursuing a long-term agenda, but if you continue the series long enough, I get the feeling that it's going to backfire on them. (Her? It would be great if the happy receptionist was actually the driving force behind this.) The only character we've seen so far who looks like he could give the conniver their comeuppance is the exec who keeps sighing and saying, 'This will never work.'
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ElectricBadger
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Jul 25, 2011 |
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Really great story, I enjoyed the read. Really the only damper was that you just narrated the whole intro, rather than showing the character going through it, which would have been fun, let us get to know the character better, and would help with a faster start. Once that was out of the way, though, the story was excellent. Hope to see more - I sense that someone may be in for a surprise! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridgecaine
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2011)
- Thanks for the review. I wanted to start in the middle of the action, but you might have a point about the intro being top-heavy. I'd like to delve more into the world and the characters in subsequent chapters.
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