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Nest Slave
Author: Kathlyn Beech
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
(This month 11711 readers) (Total 13933 readers) |
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Petite construction worker Victoria Bidarte is abducted to Gor. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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interested to see where this story goes. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
bison9999
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Jul 2, 2011 |
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Nice start, would be quite enjoyable if you decide to continue it. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
nassim
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Jun 17, 2011 |
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More of a sketch than a story but off to a very promising start if the author can sustain the momentum. Stars have been given for the quality, and deducted for the lack of quantity:) (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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This story might become a really good read, but at the moment it is to short to really tell. The author has forsaken action in order to set the scene and has given us very good characterization about Victoria. There is also plenty of descriptive text to enable the reader to picture the cage and surrounding area. But that is all there is at the moment, hopefully future chapters will allow me to improve my rating. (6/10)
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