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Sandra's Fantasy
Author: Tappy McWidestance
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
(This month 67632 readers) (Total 85551 readers) |
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A forty something woman fantasizes about submitting to a young girl. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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This is by far one of the hottest, sexiest, most erotic stories I've read! The great thing is its a nice long story that is full of excitement & character building. Told from the thoughts of all characters involved, it envelopes you in their mindset & emotions. This is so much better than the short, quick stories & is well worth the time it takes to read. Tappy hits every erotic button & the activities the girls are put through will have you squirming as you read. This is a must read for those who enjoy D/s, older/younger, mom/daughter, best friend stories! It would be fabulous to see these characters continue in another story...please! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 26, 2011 |
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Shifting points of view work wonderfully well, because they're not exactly different points of view on the same matter, but rather a continuation of the main story through the eyes of the many participants.
This avoids repeting every scene and instead gives the story its excellent pace while at the same time keeping us informed about everybody's thoughts, feelings and -most importantly- agenda.
Because, while things might have gotten complicated for the reader -after all, we're dealing with four main characters and a couple of important side-characters- the entanglement of the situation(s) is crystal clear as we are able to follow motivations and feelings of everybody involved, first hand thanks to the shifting of the narrators...
Besides that -and even though we have a complex whole- there's no loose ends, no contradictions, no loopholes, no inconsistencies. In other words, everything fits to perfection. The latter basically because of the excellent portrayal -and differences- of the various characters.
It would have been so easy to fall into the trap of making everybody sound the same -like writing one narrative but sticking different names to it- but "Sandra's Fantasy" has the merit that the different people are indeed different; each with their own irks and quirks and characteristics...
In the end, Tappy McWidestance (Lappy McJonestance?) delivered a tale bordering on perfection in all aspects of storytelling: interesting and distinguished characters moving inside an intricately woven and tight plot, culminating in a "finale" which is predictable, yes, but nevertheless keeps the reader fascinated right til the end.
Extremely well done.
JJ (10/10)
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steevejo
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Jul 19, 2011 |
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not only is this story great in terms of fetish scenes and degradation acts, but it also presents a very realistic pace of character development, makes the story much much more enjoyable.... thank you .. recommended for any F/f fan (10/10)
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iceblock
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Jul 15, 2011 |
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I'd never read Tappy before now, though I'm glad I did with this one. Personally I don't think the alternating view points worked, I found it pretty distracting. And if I'm going to picky, toward the end some names changed (someone called Heather was driving instead of Nicole when they pulled into the motel lot for one example) but overall I really enjoyed this. It's one of those stories you don't like to see end. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
steevejo
(Edit) (Jul 19, 2011)
- yeah don't you wish the story conitinued a little bit more, there was still some things i wanted to see happen... like how will jeanie treat sandra from now on ? i also wanted to see what will jeanie's mother do to rose or sandra or perhaps to both of them? maybe she had a secret grudge against sandra because of her success in life and now she gets the chance to have some justice of her own? so i wish the writer would take continuing this story a bit further under consideration
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bkmasta
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Jun 29, 2011 |
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Another great job let's see where u go from here (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Jun 27, 2011 |
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i have had the good fortune to read the entire story on another site where i rated it one of my all time favourite stories. (10/10)
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IOpan
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Jun 26, 2011 |
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Although you could see the destination, the journey was well worth the reading. Well written with a wonderful style, I loved the shifting POV. The Domme's concern that they had ruined a mother-daughter relation gave the characters more dimension. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jun 12, 2011 |
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Another masterpice from Tappy with all the red hot girl-on-girl BDSM action you could want.
Well done! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Dec 26, 2011)
- Since Tappy went out to thank you for your involvement, allow me to do the same.
While I know McWidestance is able enough to pull-off a decent story all on her/his own -and I don't know how deep your involvement was on this here story- it nevertheless pleases me to no end to see someone of your stature tied to such a great tale.
My sincere thanks.
JJ
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