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The Beginning
Author: Piacere
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 14364 readers) (Total 16926 readers) |
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Piacere is a masochist. She did not just wake up one morning and decide to brand an M on her forehead, but she questions why she is the way she is? Part One of her true story, "The Beginning" looks at her early teen experiences that became the catalyst for her cravings, needs, and urges today. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
johnlw77
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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This is a very promising and intriguing start. Already the suffering and the struggle has happened and the fact that its victim is aroused by it because there is a masochist deep within her is tantalisingly exciting. If ever a story promised more, this is it! Here is a woman who will put herself voluntarily into more than she can bear, but then it will be too late for her and there will be no way back. That’s what I’m looking farad to, why I disagree with Dryhill and why I eagerly await Chapter 2, and more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
robertahunt
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Jun 1, 2011 |
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I agree with Dryhill in so far as: it's early days. But I do enjoy a masochist's point of view, and self-inflicted activities. Thanks. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 31, 2011 |
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If there are further chapters hopefully i will be able raise my rating for this story. So far this is just a lot of writing, with a beginning but no middle or proper ending and for a possible multi-part story nothing to intice one back for the next installment. (6/10)
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