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A High School Story
Author: sammy_808
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(Added on May 8, 2011)
(This month 40563 readers) (Total 50782 readers) |
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a girl (suspiciously having my name) is perverted by the nurse at her school, and learns a lot of new tricks as she's slowly turned into a petgirl. there's a lot of "learning a new thing" in it, and it maybe is a bit heavier on humiliation than on sex, so sorry if that's a problem. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
suissepervert
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Jun 7, 2011 |
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I like the basic ideas in this story, even though the author is getting a bit extreme in her scenarios. It is better to read now, with some corrections, but there is still more needed. A 7 for now. I will think over this rating after a new part. Please keep up. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
flageek
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May 16, 2011 |
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You’ve got to do some editing! A fairly good story has been hamstrung by fragmentary sentences, misspellings, a copy and paste disaster along with some horrible typing errors. Good effort! Keep trying and reading… edit and polish! (7/10)
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Modified Prisoner uk
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May 13, 2011 |
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It's an interesting story, and an even bigger effort. On The Downside: There's a lot of errors where the text repeats itself (word for word) (obviously due to bad copying & pasting). The author should also make the plot flow a little more smoothely-clearly. (6/10)
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