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Meat Camp
Author: Spitman
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(Added on Apr 10, 2011)
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A fantasy story set in a Dolcett world where women are meat. Girls at a holiday camp are challenged to beat a machine or be roasted for dinner. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Nov 23, 2011 |
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Excellent! (like all of spitman's stuff) Classic Dolcett. The only thing that would make it perfect was a little more pain/pleasure reaction as the spit goes though, but its great enough! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Doc_Odd
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Nov 2, 2011 |
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Hope there's going to be a part 2! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 17, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
DirtyOldPervert
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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A realistic story about cannibalism would make me (or any sane person) sick. What makes a Dolcett-style "meatgirl" story enjoyable is the surrealism. The girls in Dolcett stories, on a deep level, ENJOY being snuffed. They get sexual pleasure by watching other girls sacrifice their bodies, wishing it was them.
This story was very well written, and it was exactly as advertised: A pure Dolcett-style short short. It's a 8 as opposed to a 10 because it although it broke SOME new ground, and I have to admit that such classics as "Merideth's Last Interview" and especially "Dinner by Design" are a cut above it. But this story is right up there with (for example) anything Spylf ever wrote (and I like Spylf).
Good job, and I look forward to seeing more of this author's work. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Willman1
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Apr 26, 2011 |
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Standard meat story, nothing new here (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Luvr
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Apr 25, 2011 |
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While I love the Dolcett type of story, this one was lacking in detail as well as reality for me. No girl, no matter how trained, can resist screaming as a spit passes through her. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2011)
- I'm glad you like Dolcett type stories. This was intended to be pure fantasy, just like Dolcett's art. In Dolcett's story Merideth's Last Interview, in which all kinds of brutal, bloody and painful things are done to Merideth, she does not fight and scream, and her thoughts are of the eroticism of the situation that she finds herself in. I have tried to communicate a similarly surreal atmosphere in this fantasy story.
This is a short piece, and I think the level of detail is appropriate in that light. You will find some longer and more detailed stories of mine at www.dolcettgirls.com and I will be providing more stories to this website.
Thank you for taking the trouble to write a review. Your opinion is respected.
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