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The Sacrifice
Author: Marion
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(Added on Apr 24, 2002)
(This month 25292 readers) (Total 48061 readers) |
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Male submissive finds himself the sacrifical victim to an organization of women who are avowed men haters and who take pleasure in torturing and ultimately putting men to death. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
makito
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Feb 3, 2005 |
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Excellent work. Thanks. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
D. Atrocity
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May 26, 2004 |
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I really liked this one too. You could have made it a shade more detailed near the end when Kenny is about to be killed. You know, describe the pain and suffering a little more? But that's it.
This was a really good idea. My favorite part is when he begs her not to send him to hell. For some reason that sent chills of sadistic pleasure down my spine. Keep up the good Femdom. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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the ending is a bit disappointing. Would have been better to draw out the pain before the rescuers show up. Another point might have been the metnal suffering of trying find a replacement Mistress (7/10)
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bigone
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May 1, 2002 |
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Great idea and some good details. But the writing is unnecessarily repetitive and the ending seems to me quite lame. The story promises a lingering death, but doesn't deliver. Still the good points rate a respectable rating. (7/10)
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