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Animus
Author: Jilli
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(Added on Apr 24, 2002)
(This month 28992 readers) (Total 72728 readers) |
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Khaley is kidnapped from a local nightclub, and her life is never the same. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Dec 10, 2016 |
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Great story...hoping there is more to come. Ten years since the last chapter is a long time...plenty for your gifted mind to continue to unfold this erotic story. (9/10)
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part_time_angel
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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So far this was very enjoyable, i'm anxious for it to continue! i look forward to the rest of the story. (9/10)
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emziepie
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story. Usually I'll read a few lines and move on, but I found myself reading until the end. The writing is clear, precise and detailed. I look forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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chattel69
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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Very good, Ihope more chapters are soon to come, I would enjoy following the continued transformation. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 9, 2006 |
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(checking) Yup, the 'slow' code is there. Thought it must be. You'll excuse my yawning.
The story is literate and clear, but it's really hard to keep up my interest. I think there are lots who will enjoy it, and I will check back for developments. I will not score you down, just because it's not my type of story; it is quite a decent effort. (8/10)
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T38tara
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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Well done Jilli, i am glad you are back. The way you write makes me feel i am there and seeing everything. I am wondering what is next, can you lift the fail telling more what happend to Brandon. Will they be lovers in the future, they will be connected more because of the same treatment and feelings. But we'll see, i am looking forward for more and please don't wait so long for the next update. :-)
(9/10)
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PoppetToday
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Apr 8, 2006 |
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Jilli, this is great. I had to sign up for this site just to tell you how much I liked it, and that I hope more is coming. Very compeling story and the descriptions of the Khaley's thoughts feel true. I have many thoughts on where the story is headed, but nothing can be gained by sharing. I'll wait and see. Echoing others: Very well written. Looking foward to more. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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A very well-written, and well-developed story. I am eager to see where you are taking this. But, you do have a few typos ... if you are using Word, use spell-check! (9/10)
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Wyn
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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I think the author has set a good foundation for the story and am looking forward to reading more. (8/10)
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julise
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Nov 16, 2003 |
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I read this a few months ago and I cannot believe that I forgot to review it. I think that it is excellent work and I would love it if Jilli decided to come back to this one. (9/10)
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Equalizer
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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Enjoyable and well paced. I found myself skimming the M/m action, but am looking forward to Khaley's growing involvement. The psychological aspects are interesting and very much to my liking. Pls Jilli, continue to update this one. (8/10)
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chocolatenurse
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May 19, 2002 |
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An erotic story, i look forward to the installments. The buildup is suspenseful, not boring to me, and i read alot. Excudes class not seen in most of the stories in these sites. (9/10)
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hyphen666
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May 14, 2002 |
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Will someone please wake me up when and if something of significance occurs? (2/10)
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- Replied by:
jilli
(Edit) (May 15, 2002)
- I used the "slow" story code for a reason :) I don't intend to tell the entire story in two thousand words or less. Maybe I'm biased because it's my story, but I hardly think a slow start (especially when the code warns you of that) is cause for a rating of two. I would love it if someone would actually give me some feedback on my writing style or really anything in depth.
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