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Text Game
Author: Mystress Autumn
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(Added on Feb 27, 2011)
(This month 10440 readers) (Total 15992 readers) |
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A text game between a Mistress and her sub gets hot and intense. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 2, 2011 |
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I have to agree with Escritor - the font was unfortunate. If you take out the lines of "Yes", "moans" and "I (action)", there is not as much story left as there could be. (5/10)
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Escritor
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Mar 3, 2011 |
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I will not be judging the choice of font (which was not the best). The idea of the story is quite unique, even though there are other stories on the Library with the same idea, but the roles are not clearly defined. That's what turned me off most. It is a promising story, that could get much better with little effort. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
DarkWatch
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Feb 28, 2011 |
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yea, the font was difficult, but the story was unique. It had a touch of realism to it. (8/10)
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Major Littmann
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Feb 27, 2011 |
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An interesting concept ruined by a poor choice of font, barely legible I fear.
Maybe part two will redeem the tale. (5/10)
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