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Author: rivernymph
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(Added on Feb 18, 2011)
(This month 17022 readers) (Total 28019 readers) |
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Mature woman meets her master by chatroom and email. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 26, 2011 |
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I would liked to have been able to follow this story. Between the changing pov's, the variety of references and the general incoherence, I didn't have a chance. (3/10)
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