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Tracey's Ordeal at the Lodge
Author: Jake Olive
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(Added on Dec 29, 2010)
(This month 16544 readers) (Total 27893 readers) |
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Tracey breaks a sacred rule of her lodge and pays a terribly public price for her mistake. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 9, 2011 |
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I'm sorry this story hasn't garnered more attention. I'm afraid I don't have much to say about it. Thee were a few unfortunate misspellings, but on the whole not a bad read. This is definitely a softcore story. The length of time it takes to reach the climax is all right, but the climax is given pretty short shrift. Not a bad denouement, though. (7/10)
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