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Born with a cunt: An apology for being female
Author: Worthlessfem
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(Added on Dec 19, 2010)
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This story is the autobiography of a woman who has grown up in a post-feminist family and was young enough to see and understand the change of attitudes, behaviour and so on that followed from it. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
alsosprachzar
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May 13, 2012 |
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As a story posted on BDSM site, it is glaringly lacking in BDSM or sex. (1/10)
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ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Jun 26, 2011 |
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This got to be the wierdest story I have read. I am not exactly sure what the point of the story is. Is she trying to write a satire, like Johathan Swift? Is she attempting at writing a m/f bdsm story? Or is she a confused schizprhenic fucked up feminist who wants to grow a dick and yet too much a pussy to get a sex change?
The story has its merits in that it actually has some erotic content, but the continued mentions of "musculinism" and "post-feminism" is just too hard to swallow for a reader to assume that those things are actually congruent to reality. I know it's fiction, but even in fiction there is a lot of assumptions that an author must make efforts to elaborate for the audience to accept. Now, I would like to point out that there is no such a thing as "musculinism". There is "post-feminism" and that really is concerned with the sexual emancipation of women. Now that said, the story actually turns the world on its head and contributes what was for millenniums the norms of society a phenomenon of "post-feminism". That really is giving too much credit to the feminists.
My suggestion to the author is that if she really doesn't like her cunt just get a sex exchange. Everybody is doing it. It's really not that big a deal nowadays. Jesus Christ.
On the other hand, the narrator of the story, whoever that might be, actually seem to enjoy the very things that this author implicitly seems to detest. The narrator of the story, despite using all those nasty words against herself, actually seem to derive pleasure in degrading herself. And yet she is also so repulsed by those very ideas that turn herself on. Seriously, go see a pyschologist.
I myself wouldnt have given two squirts of piss about this story, but i am practicing my essay skills for my SAT. Feel free to rate my essays amigo! (1/10)
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oldiexyz
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Mar 2, 2011 |
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A good start, but then, beginning with chapter 2: No more erotic content, the story line from Chapter 1 cut...
Boring nonsense! (4/10)
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Thirsty
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Feb 21, 2011 |
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Looking forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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woolfighter
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Feb 5, 2011 |
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Your frame setting is really hot, but it seems you don't believe your own premises when it comes to tell the story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
worthlessfem
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2012)
- I guess it's difficult when you're trying to write a sort of fantasy utopia/dystopia type of story. I've been thinking about it a lot since I wrote the first three chapters and I'm going to work a lot harder on it before I post any more.
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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Dec 20, 2010 |
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It's an interesting start and might very well turn out to become a good start.
But first of all you'll need to write more then this to get anywhere ;-)
Also, some of the things where not all that good for the immersion into the story.
The main protagonist don't sound like a three year old at all, but like a girl that might be ten or twelve minimum...
And she have always though that males where superior to females, eh? Well, she haven't lived long enough to think much about it. *shrugs*
That said, I really do like the concept and look forward to reading more of this story :-)
(provided that you wish to write more off course)
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Dec 20, 2010 |
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I agree with the Major; an interesting beginning, though what direction does it lead? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 20, 2010 |
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A good start, but I do wonder where it is going. (8/10)
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