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Raiders Dungeon
Author: DemonLady
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(Added on Apr 12, 2002)
(This month 74017 readers) (Total 144353 readers) |
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Story is set in the future. A feudal system is in place. It is a mix of old and new modern miracles. Pain is a way of life for many. As the story continues in several parts an over view of what might take place in a world where even the most cruel tortures can be repaired only to begin again. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
stimpy
(Edit) |
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Mar 18, 2008 |
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Hard to rate ... excellent content from a S/m point of view, unfortunately some stylistic errors detract from the flow of the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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Close to a perfect story. I haven't read every word, but there's so much here for the sadistic reader (or the masochistic female reader). Don't miss this one, like so many people seem to have. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DemonLady
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2007)
- Thank you for your review. I truly appreciate it especially after all this time. I need to get off my lazy butt and finish the sequel.
DL
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| Reviewer:
isabeau6
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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excellent i spent most of today off and on reading this fantastic story..ah i loved Raider..i suppose we were meant to...love the names in this..the female lead character's name was so lovely..nice twists and turns..the cruelty seemed to fit into the plot..but yikes i did shudder..great job..
isabeau (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Von Schmiser
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Mar 19, 2006 |
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My,my..if only the ratings went beyond a mere 10....I just finished and you leave me breathless.....As you said, you truly Are a sadist......Lucky us readers.....I could find no faults in any of it...Such an easy read.....(if you disregard the palpitations it causes) If only I had one 10th of your writing talents..Kudos for an excellent piece. (10/10)
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Chief
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Jan 30, 2005 |
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Giving this story even one point is a sham. It is totally full of grammatical errors which make it unreadable. The author seems to think she knows something about BDSM but it is simply a childish attempt at sadism by an ignorant person. This is the kind of stuff that gives BDSM a bad name. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
DemonLady
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2005)
- HOW did you read it if it is unreadable? If you didn't read it you should not review it. It simply shows your ignorance.
It is NOT a story of BDSM it is a story of sadism. It is neither childish nor am I ignorant. You are what gives BDSM a bad name. Childish reviews of a story that has been well liked by many shows that you are neither an informed reader nor a very intelligent one. I may have grammatical errors, do forgive me your Royal Highness it is my first story. One of sadisticness not BDSM. Can YOU do better? If so do it. DL PS. This sounds like sour grapes from someone whose toes I have stepped on. If this makes you feel better,a less adult way of handling your anger,then good for you. Wait until you see the sequel if you hated this one you will hate it even more.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 4, 2004 |
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outstanding, great story, well written, thought tthrough (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DemonLady
(Edit) (Oct 5, 2004)
- Dear mkemse thank you for your review of Raiders Dungeon. I appreciate the encouragement. I am in the process of editing the story so it reads easier. Then will follow the sequel to Raiders.
Again thank you for your review. DemonLady
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 11, 2002 |
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Excellent intensity -- 10 for violence (if that's your thing); 9 for imagination; 9 for intensity, but only about a 4 for writing style. Many of the "stylistic" problems (numerous over-long paragraphs with multiple people conversing, for example) are easily remedied with a bit of care. The author is capable of better work, I think. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
veru_skjava
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2002)
- I have just read chapter seven. The "stylistic" problems mentioned in this review have been addressed. Considereing the depth of writing skill, I hope that the above review will be reconsidered.
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Jun 28, 2002 |
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fantastic story for which i hope there are many many more chapters... truely sadistic in content, satisfies the sadistic lust while tempering it with the "personality" to appreciate the characters.... excellently written (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
sadomaster
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Apr 23, 2002 |
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impressive, very wilde (10/10)
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MissDirected
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Apr 16, 2002 |
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Quite nasty, but very exiting. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
sarah
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Apr 16, 2002 |
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A wickedly imaginative story of sadistic female punishments and humiliations...extremely well written, but not for the faint of heart (10/10)
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