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On-the-Job Training
Author: didmaker
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(Added on Nov 8, 2010)
(This month 18890 readers) (Total 28031 readers) |
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Divorcee Madelyn Pattersson gets a rather unusual training at work. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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Really liked the build up over time with the sub acknowledging her sexual arousal and attraction to Carl. In the end she comes to grips with her need for domination and chooses freely to become Carl's slave. Would have been nice to have more sex and domination towards the end. (8/10)
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seercat
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Nov 25, 2010 |
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Nicely done! It was well paced, just prurient enough to keep ones interest without going over the top.
Good work! Now do some more. (9/10)
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