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A Short Trip In Public
Author: Qmog
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(Added on Nov 3, 2010)
(This month 24286 readers) (Total 35704 readers) |
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Pamela, a young submissive woman, publicly obeys her switch mistress (Alice) and Alice’s dominant fiancée Jim. Lots of public humiliation ensue... |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 2, 2010 |
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Very enticing story. But, besides being enticing, there's not much else, I'm sad to say.
While the body of the story is more than okay, the spirit of the folk inside the story, is missing: no emotions, just descriptions of what's happening.
A pity.
JJ (7/10)
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