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Torture Toy Daughter
Author: paltego
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 131197 readers) (Total 181469 readers) |
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A sadistic lady is hired to abuse and torture a girl while her parents look on. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
dontmindme
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Aug 12, 2012 |
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Awesome story. The scenes are written in such a way that I actually feel like I'm there watching the events unfold. I love it.
Please keep writing. (10/10)
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DbqIADom
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Mar 9, 2011 |
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Great series so far. Please keep it going! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Miss Irene Clearmont
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Jan 24, 2011 |
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Dangerous stuff, well written with the tension of no names (the lady!) and evil intentions. Like it, read it two or three times. Disturbing. (9/10)
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pornsubreddit
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Jan 2, 2011 |
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This story is fantastic. It's creative, both in the scenarios as well as the premise and perspective, as well as being well written. I hope to see more updates in the future. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 10, 2010 |
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Don't know why I couldn't give this a '10'. There just seems (to me) to be something missing. I realize that this story is more about 'the sadistic lady' and her reactions than it is about the daughter, but I'm still feeling a tiny lack there.
No matter. This story seems… elegant, voluptuous even, which aren't descriptions I usually attach to a piece of prose. It's a new twist in a well-mined story vein. Quite imaginative. I especially liked the electric lingerie, which seemed a fresh approach to an old motif. The hobby horse also was the beneficiary of a fresh approach. Thank you for not going the pony girl route, which was what I was afraid you were working up to. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dngnkeeper
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Dec 9, 2010 |
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Awesome story and well written. Very heavy with great imagination. I hope you continue it. (9/10)
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bullfinch
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Dec 8, 2010 |
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Written in a literate style with plausible realism. More please. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 7, 2010 |
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Another one which lost its reviews after the last server crash. Lost sight of the story, but thanks to an update, I got re-aquainted.
Well written, "Torture Toy Daughter" is of the very hard variety, with some disgusting but very resourceful and highly erotic tortures.
Paltego manages to keep the story's tension throughout, thanks to a vivid imagination and colourful descriptions.
Hard, but very good.
JJ (9/10)
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b_rad20000
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Dec 5, 2010 |
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This is an awesome story and one of only stories in recent updates that I've truly enjoyed reading and have read more than once. Please continue the story. (9/10)
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