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: Fred's Slut
Author: Abe
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(Added on Oct 12, 2010)
(This month 18582 readers) (Total 28910 readers) |
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Fred's wife is kidnapped and tortured to make her mend her immoral ways. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Abe should go on a holiday. The Bahamas. Labrador. Someplace like those. Get some fresh air. Get a change of surroundings. Watch the locals. Learn the Wango-Tango. Whatever. Anything to get the cobwebs from his head.
"Fred's Slut" shakes on its foundations like Uncle Tom's cabin during a B-52 airstrike.
The basis for a story is an idea. But usually, that idea needs developing into becoming a story. The latter is something Abe seems to have overlooked. Again.
Amazing, considering that Abe is capable of so much better. Although I'm getting less and less sure of that, wading through what he's been posting lately.
JJ (6/10)
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