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My Girl Annie
Author: Britta
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(Added on Oct 8, 2010)
(This month 23937 readers) (Total 34554 readers) |
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An ongoing diary of excerpts from my life with my roommate, friend and slave, Annie. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jul 19, 2011 |
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A very well written story with good characterisation and to top it all totally beleivable. The big question is when are we going to have more about these two delightful people? (10/10)
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Genevieve1986
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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I absolutely adore this story. I wish you'd write more, I'd love to see how their relationships goes on. (9/10)
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Ambuja
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Dec 10, 2010 |
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Less is more. You have written just enough to keep your readers, including me, eagerly scrolling through the list of newly published stories -- hoping to find part 2.
You have developed your characters and storyline with a fine, measured pace. Everything is remarkably simply, and yet crystal clear at the same time.
It is a pleasure to read such a charming story on a regular basis. Thank you.
(10/10)
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dou
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Nov 9, 2010 |
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Excellent writing and character developments. Left me very curious about how the story will develop. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 8, 2010 |
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One of those rare instances where a reader is comfortable with the writing right from the first word. Because, thanks to the fluent style, that reader is captivated immediately.
Not only because of that style, of course, but also because, right from the first sentence, you want to know. Full stop.
As a reader I felt comfortable, because I never had the feeling I was reading a story. Instead, I felt like I was witnessing something, like, the story was a narrative going with some mental cinematography, you know, giving me insight into what I was internally watching.
I don't have that often, that someone rebuilds the upper confines of my skull into a plush movie theatre. Only the better writers can do that.
Britta clearly belongs in that category of people who have *it*.
Which is the best symbiosis one could wish for; that of a great author, a great well written story and a sucker who falls for that kind of stuff...
I can only hope that the diary is one of the older, very thick variety, like, the one-thousand pages kind.
Thank you, Britta.
JJ (10/10)
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