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On the Isle of Insanity
Author: Xspy4u
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(Added on Jun 27, 2010)
(This month 20429 readers) (Total 26567 readers) |
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Heather and her brother are sent to the Reformation Island in order to receive training for citizenship. The training requires a lot of humiliation, bondage, and punishment at the hands of teachers and students. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Wonderful story. A must read. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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Quite the interesting set-up. Neatly laid out narrative, with a nice touch in the fact of the proceedings at the Inquiry Court being distant and matter of fact, while at the same time being the malicious framework to..errr... frame Heather.
I would have liked to see more than one matron to secure Heather, though, as it's not as easy as it seems in a lot of stories to both cuff and gag a person who's free of movement... The latter is more a sign of my fondness for details and doesn't take away from the story. And as far as nipples the size of pencil erasers go, I fear it must have been a while since some authors were in school, becaus crayons or pencils are a mere 6mm in diameter (about a quarter of an inch) which is far below the average thickness of a nipple. At least, on European women, that is...
Am not too keen on the male submissive stuff, but I'll carry that burden gladly, as long as the writing is good and the story interesting. "On The Isle Of Insanity" is guilty of both.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
xspy4u
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2010)
- JJ- as always thanks for the review. I really cringed on the eraser cliche, and should have trusted my instinct...but yes a US #2 pencil eraser is a little over 1/4 of an inch...and women in europe (or men) are blessed (because u like detail- the avg nipple in US women is 6.78mm) Not keen on the male submissive stuff either, but get a ton of requests :) Again thanks for the review...I'll watch the details for you
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