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Pauline in the Witch's Pot
Author: Audrey Ermine
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(Added on Mar 29, 2002)
(This month 13718 readers) (Total 28459 readers) |
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Celestine, a beautiful witch, captures a woman to boil and eat. The first in a series of cannibalism stories starring Celestine. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 25, 2011 |
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She was greedy eating an entire female, or did she bottle some of the Lady Soup?
An intersting idea that could have been so much better. Some more characterization, description of the room and above all the feelings and emotions of the two characters. i suggest the author re-write this piece adding more suspense and emotion then we should have a story worthy of a higher rating. (7/10)
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balorlv
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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The story has potential but needs more body. It develops to quickly. Try and build the suspense.Also needs editing as too grammar and spelling.Still I enjoyed it. (6/10)
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sweetjing
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Mar 31, 2002 |
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so-so... a bit too short. Had the potential but missed some points (5/10)
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