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Marieanne
Author: Sir Lav
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(Added on Jun 10, 2010)
(This month 21890 readers) (Total 38866 readers) |
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A happy housewife who has erotic fantasies involving bondage, torture and submission, which just might lead her into real slavery. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 19, 2010 |
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I liked the 'surprise' ending, which I didn't see coming. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 13, 2010 |
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As per JimmyJump a little more editing would have improved this story. It was a little on the prdictable side, she had to be dreaming or this was one really weird garage. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Surtea
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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Wild... I liked the roughness of it all, the sheer brio of the fantasy. But the plotting and the dialogue were good too. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 10, 2010 |
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Not bad. An enjoyable read, even. Just that our beloved heroine's subjugation seems a tad forced (no pun intended). That, and the dire need of a synonym dictionary (using three times the word 'smooth' in one sentence, for example) are the only flaws this story burdens.
JJ (7/10)
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