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Corrupting Anna
Author: Simply Chris
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(Added on Mar 29, 2002)
(This month 18048 readers) (Total 49043 readers) |
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A lustfull mother brings her daughter into her world of erotitism, the hard way. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 4, 2003 |
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Good story, badly served by the spelling or it would
have received a better note. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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This is a pretty decent story. I'm reviewing as I read so bear with me. Something I noticed right away is that that the past tense is used improperly ... what I mean is that -ed is added even when not required. Also, "Slowly with out hesitation" doesn't work. Either it's slow, or without hesitation (also, without is not two words). The writing style in itself is good. There is nothing in here that a quick MS Word Spelling and Grammar check would not fix. The story is, as hyphen666 says, rather off the beaten path, but is not without its interest. Good work. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 15, 2003 |
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This is an exciting story and it is well told but it does suffer from some pretty poor spelling and grammar. If it was tidied up, it would rate higher. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Mar 30, 2002 |
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This one is off to a good start despite a few failures in proofing. Mother-daughter confrontations such as this are a bit off the beaten path, another plus. Looking forward to more chapters, i hope. (8/10)
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