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JO
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on May 9, 2010)
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A young, attractive submissive experiences her first public display and discipline session by her Master |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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May 16, 2010 |
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Some stories read like poetry. Poetry which has been shot at you with a Tiger tank.
"JO" is such a story. It's like going to a première of the Bolshoi ballet to find someone mistakingly invited the lads from Metallica to play the accompanying score.
Although metallica is a bad example, as their (aptly titled for this venue) "S&M", or "Symphony And Metallica" proved. Deep Purple's "Concerto For Group And Orchestra" is better suited. Which all of a sudden makes this a music review.
From music to gardening, just to stay on topic, as I feel that J Lewis plants roses on a refuse-dump and somehow manages to synchronize things in such a way that everything falls into place: the roses aren't as beautiful as we've been led to believe and waste dumps aren't as ugly or smelly as we think. It's just a matter of point of view. And writing skill. And imagination, too, of course.
J Lewis has, besides the skill, imagination a-plenty. Lucky for us, we're being made privvy.
Thanks for that.
JJ (10/10)
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