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Meeting at Bedford Mills
Author: NewEnglandGuy
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(Added on Apr 22, 2010)
(This month 30386 readers) (Total 48564 readers) |
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A married woman strays, and her husband gives her a choice: leave the marriage with nothing, or sign up to a Chastity and Deportment Program... |
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masterrod
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Jun 4, 2010 |
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Very good story, lots og item I love, hope there is more. (9/10)
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John Louis
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May 3, 2010 |
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Great story, both refreshing and arousing and well written (as far as I can understand), too bad it is so short, it whets your appetite and leaves you longing for more!
This story touches some of my favourite topics. I do not think muscle degeneration is icky or "a major squick" it fits well into this plot because it enhances the sense of control on Simone (my opinion is obviously biased)
For the records I also posted the link on yahoo group confiningclothings, this story also fits well in there. I have also humbly submitted to the author some suggestions for a sequel!
(9/10)
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Surtea
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May 3, 2010 |
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Wow, that was hot, and well written. I agree that the muscle degeneration is icky but it's a minor complaint in a very horny story. (9/10)
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SirItalo
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May 1, 2010 |
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Thanks for this wonderful story . I really enjoy reading about her discomfort . A situation I'd like to read about would be Simone having to hug poeple could be relatives or friends , while have her bra with spikes inside .
Could it be possible to make her wear where her arms would be completly restrained and hidden away like in reverse prayer . It would add to discipline in my opinion . (9/10)
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Illuminatus
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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Excellent. The writing is clean and to the point, and the story is interesting and fun. I might like more temporal presence - that is, a description of how she feels and acts in actual events, as opposed to general habits. Also the almost in-passing mention of some modification (disfiguring tattoos, muscular degeneration), is a major squick and needs to be in the tags, or maybe removed if it's not critical to the story. Thanks so much for the lovely story! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- The next episode should include some parts told from Simone's point of view, including her thoughts on her predicament. Modifications: good point, I will remove the references, and save them for a different tale.
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explwr
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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Very elegantly written, refreshing style, crisp and to the point. In short remarkably good.
From an engineering point I'm surprised no thigh bands. Really liked the posture control, though why should she have to hold her head high?
What's missing? I would love more details of Simone's life, interactions with others and thoughts, and feelings. In short give us more, please! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- Thank you for the kind words. Thigh bands: unnecessary when all your clothes keep your thighs pinned together. Her head: You try walking with your shoulders held back in a posture harness and in 5.5" heels and *not* holding your head erect ;-) Glad you're enjoying it, more to come...
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dragonfly996
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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Loved it! Maybe we'll see her in the future??? Thanks (9/10)
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paulopost
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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I really like it! I hope that we'll read something more about the "Chastity and Deportment Program"! (9/10)
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Beelzebob
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Apr 26, 2010 |
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Entertaining and well paced but could have used some editing with respect to some of the font characters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- *Issue with text characters now corrected*
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bracemaiden
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Apr 25, 2010 |
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Wow! I loved it! OK, I had to put it to Word to wipe out the special characters that texanpauline mentioned, but the story was great! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- *Issue with text characters now corrected*
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easyd
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Apr 24, 2010 |
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good story. Just a bit tame. (SImone might be subjected to a bit more discomfort..ie more interesting plugs/dildoes and uncomfortable bras) Nothing extreme but more interesting. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2010)
- Noted. She may indeed have problems because of her behavior, with more strict training required ;-)
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texanpauline
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Apr 23, 2010 |
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Absolutely loved it. Some funny characters in the text for some reason, but I loved the story; I could so much imagine myself as poor Simone! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
NewEnglandGuy
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- Thank you for your kind words. *Issue with text characters now corrected*
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