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The Bike Club
Author: kemosabe
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(Added on Mar 20, 2002)
(This month 16218 readers) (Total 32576 readers) |
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Janet and David become members of a Bike Club and find a new way of life. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
cymbidia
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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Wooohooo! Hot. Excellent. I loved it. Only one criticism: Why did Dave stay? The author didn't give enough reason for Dave to make the decision he did. Otherwise a "10". (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2006)
- Thanks for your kind comments. I'm not sure what you mean about Dave staying; I don't believe he had a choice. Anyway, as much in love with Janet as he was, why would he leave?
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 13, 2004 |
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Not much of a fan of he said she said. But the story was well written otherwise. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Sep 15, 2002 |
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I liked the basic premise of the story and its layout. The reprise of the opening paragraph works well. The story could have been more detailed and longer, although of course this a common complaint with GOOD short stories.
A challenging lifestyle message as well! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladyvet
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Mar 24, 2002 |
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The use of two interlaced points of reference was interesting and effective. (9/10)
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