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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Rating: |
Mar 31, 2010 |
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I like original stories, and this is to me an original take on a subject but it doesn't work.
Even if it is Ch 1 of 6 it has to stand alone on bdsmlibrary unless all the chapters are uploaded together so its a 5 for me, forty feet up a flagpole upside down with ropes round her legs she's about to die and would be screaming her head off and then the guy goes home, he'll have the feds round as soon as daylight comes and they find her, it needs more imagination.
Sorry (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
(Edit) |
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Mar 31, 2010 |
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Not much in the way of charaterization. In fact little of anything. This will be alright if there is more about the two charaters to follow, if not then it will have to remain a six. (6/10)
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