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Emily's Party
Author: Paul Phillips
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(Added on Mar 21, 2010)
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Emily wakes up from a night out to find herself locked in a stock and a special guest at a special party |
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| Reviewer:
travelin.fool
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Mar 29, 2010 |
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Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
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Major Littmann
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Mar 25, 2010 |
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I don't know Paul Phillips's work but either he doesn't speak English as a first language or he needs to learn to spell, because the spell check is putting the wrong words in Crack for Crank for instance.
And it's stocks, a rifle has a stock you trap a person in the stocks, Otherwise the conversation is reminiscent of Sesame Street and the action difficult to visualise from the information.
Average idea poorly executed (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Mar 23, 2010 |
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Good work, well written. I say this dispite the comments written before mine, although I have to agree that the spelling could have been better the dialogue was just fine I thought.
Thank you I'm enjoying it so far. (9/10)
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grinner666
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Mar 23, 2010 |
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Couple of nice ideas and the story moves along nicely, but the author really, REALLY needs to work on his dialogue-writing skills. His characters ... all three of them, so far ... all talk like Robbie the Robot. (6/10)
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Surtea
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Mar 22, 2010 |
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Yummy. Very sweet. I'd like a second helping please. (9/10)
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