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Master Trains His Slave
Author: subbie sam
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(Added on Mar 20, 2010)
(This month 41876 readers) (Total 70694 readers) |
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Master meets a new slave and trains her the proper way to be of use. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Apr 25, 2010 |
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Paragraphing would help, but you really do not get into the head of either of the characters. Nor do you do any real training, which implies correction and improvement. You start with yelling and continue at with that throughout. (4/10)
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Secretside247
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Apr 23, 2010 |
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BEST STORY EVER WRITTEN!! Absolutely incredible! This is what I call HARDcore! hehe Cant wait for more! (10/10)
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