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Modern Slavery
Author: Karen1982
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(Added on Jan 28, 2010)
(This month 46218 readers) (Total 82038 readers) |
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What will happen in a world where slavery is legal and the accepted norm. April is about to find out. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Feb 14, 2012 |
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Enjoyable story, but could have been better if April had spoken up & we could have had a great nc moment. Not really buying her silence in this situation. But like everyone else, I'm waiting for the rest of the story & if the erotic value goes up, so will the rating. (7/10)
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mokuba31
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Feb 14, 2012 |
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Come on Karen! It's been nearly 2 months since your post on "Slavery in our time" you said you were working on chapter 5 back then. Any shot you are done? Or could at least bless us with chapter 4? His story was plagerism, without a doubt, but it at least offered the chance to see what happened next. I've been waiting for 2 years, give me something. (10/10)
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fixingbeast
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Dec 26, 2011 |
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This story has great potential. (10/10)
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littleone_
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Jul 5, 2011 |
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really excellent work. I hope we don't have to wait five hears between stories again. (10/10)
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redwrangler
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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I like this perhaps a spanking with a paddle when April balks at being a slave to her new woman owner.
Please continue this exciting story soon. (9/10)
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johnlw77
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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This beginning is as excellent as it is rare. The slave-to-be's condemnation for life steals up on her in such a subtle and deceptively gentle way. the tension builds up and arouses us as we begin to identify what is to happen to her whilst she has not yet understood. It's the deliciousness of us knowing that when she was asked by Jessica to strip, this is the last time she will have any control over what she wears, that when she is so lightly but effectively chained she will never again walk freely. It is the excitement of us realising that what have till now been her private fantasies will be imposed on her, her fate, her doom.
I hope this standard of writing continues, well expressed and punctuated and the more devastating for having no crudeness or gratuitous violence. I cannot wait for the next instalment, as April is forced to internalise that she has lost her freedom for ever and has become property. Roll on her relentless descent into full slavery!
(April 28 2010) ah the third chapter has now come! It's arousing for the way it depicts April's paralysis because of her fear. How will she react on waking up? Will she try to get the 'mistake' reversed perhaps be punished for that? How long will it take her to internalise what she has now become? What services will her owner require of her? And will Jessica reappear and if so will she find a sadistic gloating inside herself, or will she be grief-stricken? Thanks Karen for such a great story. Here’s to the next chapter.
(10/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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PARTS 1 - 3:
In many ways i agree with Satan Klaus's remarks and was going to give this story a 6 or 7. But if one suspends belielf and enters a fantasy world then this story become more believeable. The character of the central girl/slave is well portrayed.
i hope to read more soon. (8/10)
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tetovaza
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Feb 12, 2010 |
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The Great story i have read it more the 20 times and like to continuate thas story
Excellent Story !!!!
Pliss continuate the story i want more parts (10/10)
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Ladykate
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Feb 8, 2010 |
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A very nice start. Please keep going with this. I think it could be worth it. (9/10)
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Satan_Klaus
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Feb 7, 2010 |
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I like the overall premise and the world setting but I'm afraid the introduction is taxing my suspension of disbelief a bit much. The girl's motives are weird and, certainly, such a world, not unlike ours, would require extensive registration papers and the like. It's unlikely that a mistake as simple as that could be made with no one noticing. (7/10)
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BrazenBitch
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Feb 5, 2010 |
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outstanding. looking forward to more. what a shock for this poor girl. heh.
p.s. don't worry about not having any foot worship in it. i have my fetishes too (teat torture), but i don't take points away from stories which don't feature that. (9/10)
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feetslave678
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Feb 4, 2010 |
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a 9 only because it does not contain any Foot Worship scene, which I feel is a must for any BDSM Story... Otherwise the story is amongst the best I have ever read.. Keep it up! (9/10)
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sissykris
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Feb 3, 2010 |
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i can not wait for more of this story (9/10)
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fitzgilbert
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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need to be continued. (9/10)
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foxeye1
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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An excellent beginning, well written and punctuated and very easy to read. Nice 'believable' build up to what promises to be an excellent story which thankfully avoids the use of bad language.
A very promising start which bodes well. Thank you for the story (10/10)
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Silversea
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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This is one of the best stories Ive read here. I love the slave is condemned in such a subtle and unexpected way. I would love to be April (10/10)
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SlavesDom
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Jan 29, 2010 |
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Hello, your story ecited me much. there is so much tension in it that I am curious to read more and can't await to see the next part of it. (10/10)
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Major Littmann
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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Beautifully written
I hope you post updates before I forget this refreshingly different and excellent gentle start to a slavery story. (10/10)
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travelin.fool
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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I can't wait to hear what happens next. (10/10)
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