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The Atonement Continues
Author: Kimberly Lavly
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(Added on Jan 12, 2010)
(This month 21434 readers) (Total 41885 readers) |
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Barbara fell into deep submission in the story "The Atonement." Now she sinks deeper still, learning the true meaning of the title "Bitch" |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Cutter75
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Jun 2, 2010 |
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Good Pros. The story does stand on its own and I would like to see a lot more! I do agree with removing the children from the story. It is possible they could live with relatives or sent off to boarding schools. Maybe you could introduce a sister or cousin, or both, of Barbara's to the storyline. Both of these women could help in the day to day K9 service. I really took to the idea of having Barbara being available to 'Master' 24/7. Keep up the great work. Rating 9/10 (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
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Jan 23, 2010 |
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Good follow up. Hope to see more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rafter9
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Jan 21, 2010 |
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the umiliation aspects are real good with the dogs..the kids have to go,how about if her accident victem dies and to remove her from the area,MR Bryant and an accomplish,male or female,agree to relocate her to a training establishment and she has to accept being a total slave,and has more humilating big O,s becouse of it.let the debacury begin gled to see the revival. (8/10)
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rocket71
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Jan 20, 2010 |
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Enjoyed this story much. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jan 14, 2010 |
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I don't see the connection to "The Atonement" by a different author except the characters are the same, ande as a stand alone story this doesn't really work and the writing is substantially inferior to The Atonement, I think I am being generous with a 7/10 (7/10)
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TANK1
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Jan 13, 2010 |
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Very good story development. (9/10)
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