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Jill-Jim-Kim
Author: Jim
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(Added on Feb 11, 2002)
(This month 31366 readers) (Total 66710 readers) |
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Teaching sex to a girl and her sister. Also another couple gets involved. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 10, 2005 |
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just doesn't cut it (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Dec 23, 2003 |
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There's some promise in this story, but it does need some work. The biggest problem is that the story is very methodical. Each paragraph is basically a step with little flow and transition. It's very mechanical. With some work, the story might be good. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Jun 8, 2002 |
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I really tried to read the story but I started with the current chapter. It was all one paragraph and no dialogue. It was all she said, he said.
If you are going to write, at least let someone edit the story so it is readable.
(3/10)
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| Reviewer:
trusser
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Feb 14, 2002 |
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This story is better suited for some soft-core site. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Feb 13, 2002 |
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A good start but too protracted for my tasye
(3/10)
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| Reviewer:
LadyLibra
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Feb 11, 2002 |
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Great start, I like to wait for more chapters before reading a story, I'm glad I didn't. Please dont keep us waiting to long! (7/10)
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