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My Lucky Life
Author: Operator Zero
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(Added on Feb 7, 2002)
(This month 101727 readers) (Total 142732 readers) |
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A wealthy man finaly finds a girl he can share his kinky tastes with. There's only one problem. She's not 18 yet. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MarkAnders
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Nov 8, 2016 |
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Excellent story. Very well done and for extreme bdsm, body mod and slavery, not to mention the underage issue, tasteful and erotic. (9/10)
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fundagirl
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Nov 29, 2014 |
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Fantastic story. I like the slow build-up and tension. It is quiet believable. I would love to read a sequel. (10/10)
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Ralphus
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Jun 30, 2008 |
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Very well written, the tension slowly built up. Would have liked to have seen the Mother's reaction if she'd seen more of what the girl had gone through and what was in the future. (9/10)
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gundam
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May 31, 2006 |
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Hope we won't have to wait another 6 month for the next chapter.
Please keep it comming! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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great, wonderfull and very enjoyable (9/10)
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masterrod
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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very well writen and thought out, same theres not more. (9/10)
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teamster
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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enjoyed the detailed and accurate descriptions of piercing proceedures etc. didnt mind the slow pace, it allows more time to be spent on character development and emotional byplay. (9/10)
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Spectre
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Aug 28, 2005 |
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Interesting and enjoyable story. Spelling and grammer errors detract somewhat from the story. (8/10)
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master2slavesny
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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I like the slow development of characters and the story was very enjoyable. I do not mind spelling and grammar mistakes. The only thing I would ask in this story is that the future parts are updated periodically. (9/10)
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H Dean
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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This story reminded me of a tale that drinking buddies would share. Not believable and sophomoric, at best. One particular caveat I have is the grammatical error of using the non-existant word "allot", which was used repeatedly and made me cringe every time I read it. On the positive side, the erotic descriptions were better than average and I did find a few of them to be quite good. Another positive is that this author is not in a hurry to get to the "meat" in a story and is willing to spend time in developement. Finally, I think this author has potential once stories like this one are out of his? system. (6/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Sep 23, 2003 |
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The slow pace of development is the mark of a talented writer. However I was put off by the numerous mistakes in spelling and weak constructions. (8/10)
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mlbryant
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Feb 14, 2002 |
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I agree that the story is a little slow developing, but that is the case when characterization is important to the story. A good read. (9/10)
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trusser
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Feb 14, 2002 |
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Wonderful story a little slow but hot I hope there are future installments (8/10)
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LadyLibra
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Feb 8, 2002 |
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Great Story!!! Is there more on the way? (9/10)
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