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Unrelenting Desire
Author: loreilei
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(Added on Feb 5, 2002)
(This month 8730 readers) (Total 16392 readers) |
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Captive girl, who suffers, and fights her fears to find comfort in the end. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
tbear4759
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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gawd awful (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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had the potrntial of being a resal killer story and missed the mark (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
luc
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Nov 29, 2002 |
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This story is....full of too many ....elipses...the author needs to make the aquaintance of... the coma and the period...two perfectly legitamate punctuation marks...that come in real handy...in certain narrative situations...other than that perhaps the author... should reconsider....the use of the present tense....which tends to sound stilted...Regardless i liked the story...nice and sadistic...love reasonable amounts of torture thrown in with sex... (5/10)
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