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a new life
Author: Dave.
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(Added on Dec 16, 2009)
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Oct 17, 2010 |
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This story almost made it to the professional level. Superb writing, and the setting is masterful. I personally find it a little more brutal than is my taste, but for some, the vignette will be pure heaven. I will definitely peruse the remainder of this author's offerings because the quality of this tale demands it. (9/10)
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lp1951
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Love the detail which the story is written and the imagination of the author when placing the women into humilating activities. This is absolutely an excellent story and cannot wait for the next chapter. Wondering in what manner Julie will be placed into when she loses her virginity. Also, the detailed description of their panties adds a beautiful touch! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wincert
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2010)
- Thank you for the kind words. Comments like yours are all a writer needs to inspire him to continue.
- Replied by:
wincert
(Edit) (Apr 10, 2010)
- Thank you for the kind words. Comments like yours are all a writer needs to inspire him to continue.
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