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Paying the Price
Author: Anne
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(Added on Dec 16, 2009)
(This month 34428 readers) (Total 54023 readers) |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
RallyWeasel
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Oct 6, 2012 |
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A nicely written story with compelling action and good descriptions. It's a longer story but kept me engaged all the way through. I look forward to more stories from the author. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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'Best' story from Anne's hand so far. Anne manages to create some great female characters. Maybe because to an extent, she uses some of her own traits to paint the picture.
Of course there's a lot of writing skill involved as well, otherwise things wouldn't be as good as they are.
The way Carina goes about her trying to convince the professor of letting her 'make it up' to him is a delight to read. A great mix of capturing behaviour, action/reaction and conversation. Excellent stuff.
Anne also manages to get things steaming, without getting all exhuberant and stuff. Nope, Anne does it in subtle but accurate descriptions. Hints of thoughts, little movements and musings.
Like I said, excellent stuff.
On top of all the aformentioned, Anne also manages to keep things at a steady pace. Building up the story without rushing things, keeping the shenanigans interesting thanks to the descriptions.
The gradually shifting of Claire's psyche, accepting more and more as she's sucked into the depravation of her own behaviour and reactions. Adding coal to her own fire, so to speak.
"Paying The Price" is the kind of story which makes you present all your buttons on a silver platter, for Anne to please push 'em all.
It's also the kind of story which has one hoping sweet Anne will get her pen filled again and starts scribbling away. For this author merits to be read. But, for that, you've got to write... Not pushing anybody, you know, but still...
Did I say I found this to be excellent? No? Well, I do...
Congratuliere, freulein Anne.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Anne4humiliation
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2010)
- Thanks for the raving review. Write another one like it and my head won't fit though any more doors. *grins*
And yes, I should really finish the story. I will, too. Some day, when I am in the mood AND have the time. The second point is usually the problem. But I will, promise. If I don't, come by and spank me. ;-)
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| Reviewer:
Anne4humiliation
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Jun 22, 2010 |
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There was some confusion and a wrong story was published under this title and my name. But that has been changed and the story you read is mine indeed. And of course I think it is excellent *grins*
Anne (10/10)
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AlbusLupa
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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No matter who wrote it is worth reading. Well writen for a internet story I've seen stories I disliked fare more in terms of spelling and mixing persons names. None of this is pressent in this story. And like the plot.
Sorry to hear it might have been put here to damage someone but feel it is wrong to discard something because who wrote it. But if Anne4humiliation and Anne is the same person I suggest it is moved to unknown authour or such would be bad to discard its qualities. (8/10)
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