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Vacation
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Jan 28, 2002)
(This month 14872 readers) (Total 35088 readers) |
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Patrick and Mary take a much needed vacation, only to be intercepted by the local law. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 11, 2004 |
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you never let readers down (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tractortorture
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Feb 22, 2003 |
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Good story, hard, rough, with good characters. Not the usual cop out ending. Kallie has one hell of a imagination. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
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Feb 23, 2002 |
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The ending really framed the whole story great. More of Kallie's pregnancy fears, done better here than ever as the wife is in plain view of the powerless husband. Not a *happy* ending, but powerful. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Pillager
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Feb 1, 2002 |
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The writing here, the imagery, is fabulous. The interplay between husband and wife as she is raped is incredible. In all, very arousing, well put together story. Keep up the good work! (10/10)
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