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Femdom Series
Author: Rick_oh
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(Added on Feb 14, 2009)
(This month 20697 readers) (Total 31708 readers) |
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He gets a pleasant surprise, the maid is not so lucky. First in a series of femdom stories. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Feb 15, 2009 |
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No character development, way too short, and even seems incomplete, since the ending does not appear to be such.
Still, the author's writing skills are acceptable, he could improve the story by expanding it. (5/10)
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