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Blind Date
Author: Master Jay
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(Added on Jan 14, 2009)
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A blind date leads to a woman submitting to a man looking for a woman to dominate. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bluefarie
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Feb 20, 2009 |
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I have enjoyed each installment! Please do continue! :) (9/10)
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mr_slogan
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Feb 16, 2009 |
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I greatly enjoy the story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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good premise (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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"Oh boy", is all I can say, really.
This reads like something that was written as a private fantasy, with sweaty palms and feverish eyes. In the process, all attention for detail was lost, as well as in-depth characterizations, story build-up and sense of human interaction.
Once again, the author is way to keen on displaying brute force being applied to a willing participant.
Conversations are reduced to a minimum, which makes me surmise that Devon used some sort of subliminal way of conversing with Simone.
And Simone must be one desperate gal to fall for Devon after their little encounter at the restaurant.
Like I said: "Oh boy"...
JJ (4/10)
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